a Photographic Journey by Meryl

Whisper

 tell me

how lavender skies

stretch across

your dreams

how sadness

is soothed

by grape and

raspberry streams

how beach plums

turn white

praying

just before

twilight

talk to me

whisper clear

your visions

your hopes

let me hear

©Meryl Spiegel 2012–All rights reserved–No reproduction without permission

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12 responses

  1. Beautiful. The gentle richness of colours soothing, so soothing to the soul. That’s how we all wish to be listened to…to be drawn out of ourselves. Sharon

    August 10, 2012 at 11:33 am

    • Ohhh…you’re such a sweet, sensitive soul, Sharon…to be drawn out…that was exactly my intention…so pleased it soothed you…xom

      August 10, 2012 at 12:33 pm

  2. Jeff E.

    I think this is the most positive, uplifting, cheerful poem of yours I have ever read! Hope it indicates your current mood. It also is making me hungry for sorbet!

    August 10, 2012 at 1:57 pm

    • Thanks Jeff….hope you found some grape or raspberry sorbet and yes, I’m feeling better… It’s been a stressful month…

      August 10, 2012 at 4:47 pm

  3. Beautiful words Meryl, I particularly liked the way you speak to the reader ~ by asking for action in the first and last line! … perfect for this image – and very much helpful to me right now, especially ~ Thank you xxoo

    August 10, 2012 at 6:42 pm

  4. So happy it gave you some comfort Robyn…it came to me this morning after trying to force it last nite… amazing how the mind works while we sleep..love u…xoxm

    August 10, 2012 at 7:36 pm

  5. Jeff E.

    Meryl, here is a humble addition to your excellent poetry above, hope you like it. “Help me…to ignore. the sour tang…of fear. appreciate…sweet waves…of joy. Lapping so near. nature’s banquet waits… my soul…starved. A river of sorrows…a channel…so deeply carved. Feed me…hold me…show me how. My fast …is over…I’m hungry now.”

    August 12, 2012 at 7:02 am

    • Lovely Jeff, I’m always flattered when my work inspires you to pick up your pen…but rather sad. hope all is well….xom

      August 12, 2012 at 9:20 am

  6. Beautiful pictures to go with beautiful words from you. I loved the last part of the poem.

    August 12, 2012 at 2:01 pm

    • I appreciate your kudos…it’s not always easy to express ourselves clearly or to hear what others are trying to tell us…

      August 12, 2012 at 5:19 pm

  7. A beautiful, beautiful all around post. Moved.
    Thank you!

    August 28, 2012 at 9:57 pm

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